I have a unique experience when I was in Senior High
School. I forgot the day and the date but I still remember the story until now.
Here it is. On that day, I was worked on my homework with my friends Vicky and Derine to discuss
about history assignment. We worked on that assignment until 07.00 o'clock at night when I was
ready to get dinner. I heard a strange voice in front of my door. The voice
seemed like a lyrics of the song “Lengser Wengi”. A myth said if you hear that
sound, the ghost “Kuntilanak” came to your house and kill you. I was
frightened because before that song appeared, we had discussed about horror
story about Kuntilanak. My two friends were frightened too. But, we had to
be brave and we decided to opened the door, and you know what ? When we opened the door there
was nobody in front of the door but the sound still appeared. We became very
frightened and back to bed. Then, I heard a familiar voice, and it was my friends Aggio and Fahmi, they laughed so hard until they were crying because of our scream. It was my unique story when I was in Senior High School.
It's a good try, Kristian! Keep on improving by paying more attention to the technical matters and sentence fragments.
ReplyDeleteIt's a good story kris. Just learn to be more brave, especially if that was a myth. I think, no need to too believe with a myth like that. Just believe with our Savior, God...
ReplyDeleteKinda funny story instead of scary story, but its quite interesting, because i've never experienced something that related to "Real Ghost" XD
ReplyDeleteNice story! a minor suggestion: be consistent with grammar and spellings while creating a story that happened in the past. That's it
ReplyDeleteKuntilanak did'nt kill you, her father did "Genderuwo" maybe ..
ReplyDeleteAhaha its a cute story bcause u and ur friend look sriously to discussed somethin about ghost and before u discussed u and ur friend are joking bout the song "Lengser Wengi" so thats why u and ur friend are screaming:P
ReplyDeletegood story. But I hope that's just joke from your friend and didn't real.
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